Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter - suggest how you could help her in her home -say why you would like to do this work -explain when you will and will not be available

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Hi Mr Barett, I am writing

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letter with respect to an advertisement

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posted in the community hall. I am pretty interested to assist you in the coming summer. I am Tyson David, I am a student at the University of Arizona. I have my semester holidays coming up during the summer. In the course of time, I could assist you with gardening , painting and modernizing your living room. I am a volunteer in a local community, and I support people who require help.

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to that, I am passionate about gardening, and since I am an architectural student I love decorating the house interiors.

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, I will be available only two days a week on Thursday and Friday. If you would like to know more about me, we can meet up for a coffee or if you need any references to know about my work, you can enquire at the local community centre. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Vivek V

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

169 words

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