Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter - suggest how you could help her in her home -say why you would like to do this work -explain when you will and will not be available

#mrs #barrett #woman #lives #town #someone #home #hours #summer #-say #work #-explain

Hi Mr Barett, I am writing

this

letter with respect to an advertisement

that is

posted in the community hall. I am pretty interested to assist you in the coming summer. I am Tyson David, I am a student at the University of Arizona. I have my semester holidays coming up during the summer. In the course of time, I could assist you with gardening , painting and modernizing your living room. I am a volunteer in a local community, and I support people who require help.

In addition

to that, I am passionate about gardening, and since I am an architectural student I love decorating the house interiors.

Nevertheless

, I will be available only two days a week on Thursday and Friday. If you would like to know more about me, we can meet up for a coffee or if you need any references to know about my work, you can enquire at the local community centre. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Vivek V

Submitted by vivekv4 on Thu Sep 29 2022

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