What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.

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Being a
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is a huge responsibility, which needs to be done meticulously. Talking about their qualities, I can say that they are numerous.
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, in
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essay, I will try to discuss those, which I learned from my
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and I feel very glad for my
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unconditional love and care make them the most special in the world. They face myriad problems bringing up their children, and never let them know.
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, I remember my mother used to take me to the swim and the dance class after my school and she daily does
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along with her job. Not only in classes, but even after coming back home I discuss my whole day with her and she guides me whenever I feel that I am in dilemma. Surprisingly, my all problems get their solution within minutes,
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a result, always I feel very much relaxed and happy.
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,
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' motivation can do wonders for their children. As a kid, it's very easy to feel discouraged and demoralised on very simple issues.
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as getting low grades in exams makes some kids very worried. Some students feel so bad that they don't want to study
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's motivation inspires a child to do more diligent work.
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's support can ameliorate child performance leading to better results. Repercussing all these mentioned qualities, which I think very less for being a
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's , but still, I believe that
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are actually the best teacher for us as they guide us at every step of our life to make it much better and full of happiness.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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