Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays

people

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are travelling all around the world

for

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study or work. To do their daily chores, they need to interact with locals and

language

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can be one of the

barrier

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while

communicating

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. And I agree that it can not only cause social problems but

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can lead to various real-time problems.

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, every country has

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own culture and languages. And for a democratic nation like India, the dialect and

language

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changes

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every 100

kilometers

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, non-japanese

people

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living in Japan

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to struggle a lot to even ask for a train ticket or to understand where to go to work.

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countries

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in countries

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like China, Thailand,

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South Korea citizens tend to speak their local

language

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to trade, commute and speak. They even have

sign boards

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which

has

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their native script which can be hard to understand for an outsider.

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people

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find it hard to survive and have discomforted experience

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, humans like to learn new things and try to make an effort to find

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survival in any situation. So before they plan their travel to any single

language

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speaking countries they try and learn some basic

words

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beforehand which can ease their experience. But sometimes it is hard to understand the grammar of any new

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because some

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might have 2 meanings associated

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it and using that word in a wrong sentence can cause physical problems.

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, there are some

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in the

language

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Hindi

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of Hindi

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which can be used for an animal as well as for a human being behaving like an animal.

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the

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advance

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technologies help

people

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to convey their thoughts but

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it's

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not always 100% apt. To conclude, we can clearly say that surviving in

foreign

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a foreign

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country

who

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has only

local

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a local

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language

laguage

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language

to talk

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as difficult as walking for an infant. You not only have to learn new ways of speaking but acquire their cultural heritage and deliver the

words

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having equal value.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Topic Vocabulary:

Communication barriers
Misunderstandings
Expressing needs
Emotions
Language proficiency
Integration
Local community
Culture

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