Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree with? Use specific

It is argued that students like to have fun in school, but at the same time number of them see that institution is just for learning. I completely disagree with the

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opinion and think that school is bigger than just learning.

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of all, I believe that the faculty is a place to do a huge number of things not only for education. Even if some admission they doing their best to get a high score or whatever their school goal, they did not focus on their other side which is of them is "joy", these students won't keep working like they were used to doing, while equality between all our life part every day and every time will make as capable for more long term.

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, a lot of researchers found that studying for a long time without having a break like doing something to make you glad is a horrible idea for our brain. That's why schools need to be more entertaining for admission and teachers as well to be in a successful environment. 

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, the institute is our

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home, so having enjoyment is important for our mental health.

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, we spend almost 8 hours in faculty and if we will say we sleep for 8 hours that means a quarter of our day at faculty, so how we can spend 8 hours without some cheerful

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, my youngest sister always tries to have pleasant as much as she can in the academy, but

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she studies and focus on her lessons, and because of that her GPR is perfect all year.

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, the advantages of making the hall place for learning and having lively as the greatest thing for the enlistment. To conclude from the examples and arguments given I firmly believe that education and entertainment frequently intersect, and when they do, we can enjoy the best of both worlds

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as great amusement and profound learning.