Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

No one can deny that in the capitalist era, everyone can earn limitless money regardless of their type of job. Many people think that the gap between the top and bottom salary among

jobs

should be lessened. As far as I am concerned, it contributes to some problems

such

as loss of labour in

jobs

which require high quality and poverty so I totally with

this

statement.

Firstly

, one of the possible problems is that many people would head to have less complicated

jobs

such

as a philosopher rather than most complex ones

such

as a surgeon.

Hence

the quality of education would

reduce

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and many faculty related to them would close as long as the demands for

such

kinds of

jobs

reduce.

In addition

, reducing the income gap

cause

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rapid emigration to other countries which provide well-paid

jobs

. To illustrate, in turkey, many new graduated doctors have to work for hours and they get low pay in return for an outstanding effort.

Secondly

, another problem may be the rising poverty rate in the host country. Regardless of raising the lowest salary or cutting down on the highest one, putting into action a balanced-wage policy may lead to altering products’ prices completely by increasing inflation rates. Factory owners cannot meet the raw material needs owing to being overpriced so food shortage may seem

in

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nationwide.

For instance

, in China, the government launch a balanced-wage campaign to increase vote rates. As a consequence of

this

, people avoided tiring factory work and production slowed. To sum up,

although

the shrinkage of the income gap sounds beneficial for each nation, it tried many times in different countries and

this

notion collapsed. If the income pie is bigger, the smallest piece of it

will

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enough for the majority of the community.