In recent years, some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside. What problems could this cause? How could these be reduced?
Nowadays, Many nations will be developed very fastly and the economy is rising day by day.
However
, This
has resulted in higher rich standards of living in urban areas
but its
affects rural cities. There are so many situations that will be created by the authority and I will discuss them in the upcoming fourth paragraphs .
Change the pronoun
it
To begin
, any region's law-maker tries to provide well facilities for their community and public. To explain, The international government will be developing all country's economies in the next
upcoming years because technology is advanced second
by second
and it will be easy to solve any kinds
of problems. Fix the agreement mistake
kind
For example
, In Australia authorities will be developed all capital in their country and it will both sites of cities such
as rural and urban areas
and it will be also
beneficial for their citizens. Hence
, Both types of areas
will be responsible to their community and it useful for their economic growth.
In addition
, The problems will be birth to different types of individuals living in well-standard areas
such
as non-polite and aggressive persons. Furthermore
, Many well-paid workers will be working in multinational companies such
as Microsoft and these massive will be focused on their areas
and will impact other cities. For instance
, In Britain news channels reveal headlines that all people will be responsible for their areas
and when any area is dirty it will be a big fine for their society. Thus
, It will be a good effect on their nation's development and all persons follow these strict rules and it will also
be good for their environment.
In conclusion, Although
all people are following these law's very soon it will be good for their future. Moreover
, A good number of benefits in their society and citizens' health and the economy will be increased over the next
few years.Submitted by razab5469 on
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