Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important.Discuss both views

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in zoopark. It is a commonly held belief that keeping beasts in zoos has wider advantages, while others claim vice versa of the statement. In my view, the positive aspects of holding them in a zoological garden are more significant

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negative sides. One obvious upside

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in zoos is that they are protected here with special and feature services. Because there is strict control here for their health, nutrition,

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via specially trained supervisors. A

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place is convenient for endangered beasts and

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in zoological parks are applied special training and activities to protect and provide an increase of these by authorized ones. Turning to the disadvantages, one negative aspect of it is

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can be restrictive for some species of

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as migratory birds because of

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keeping beasts in zoological gardens can create a lack of mother nature vibe because it doesn't embrace a lifetime as wildlife in the forests, as a consequence those creatures might lead a passive life. In conclusion,

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in zoos

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entertaining and economically significant,

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here contain, easily observed wild

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by humans who come there to watch them.