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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important.Discuss both views

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In
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 tendency can bring
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keeping
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animals
 in zoopark. It is a commonly held belief that keeping beasts in zoos has wider advantages, while others claim vice versa of the statement. In my view, the positive aspects of holding them in a zoological garden are more significant
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 negative sides. One obvious upside
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saving
animals
 in zoos is that they are protected here with special and feature services. Because there is strict control here for their health, nutrition,
cleanliness
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 via specially trained supervisors. A
second
 possible advantage is
this
 place is convenient for endangered beasts and
animals
 listed in the red book. In view of the fact that
,
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 in zoological parks are applied special training and activities to protect and provide an increase of these by authorized ones. Turning to the disadvantages, one negative aspect of it is
this
 can be restrictive for some species of
animals
 as migratory birds because of
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 area.
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keeping beasts in zoological gardens can create a lack of mother nature vibe because it doesn't embrace a lifetime as wildlife in the forests, as a consequence those creatures might lead a passive life. In conclusion,
although
 keeping
animals
 in zoos
are
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 entertaining and economically significant,
in addition
 here contain, easily observed wild
animals
 by humans who come there to watch them.
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