A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called ‘The book that influenced me most’. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter: • describe what this book was about • explain how this book influenced you • say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Mr Mike, I am Mohamed Mahmoud, an Egyptian pharmacist who has been working in a multinational pharmaceutical company. I checked your advert yesterday in the Times magazine about the story that influenced me most.

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letter to report about a mesmerizing book called 4 success street.

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, the author of

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piece is an Egyptian life coach called "Ihab Fekry" who has worked in several businesses. The plot was about how could we implement the strategies of work-life balance to have a happy life. There are 4 pillars and milestones to consider during the planning phase to have a balanced lifestyle which are the people's religion, health, psychology, and hobby.

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piece of art was a turning point in my life due to several facts. One reason for

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is providing a guide to performing a self-assessment to identify major strengths and weaknesses. Another reason to consider is supporting with setting an action plan to tackle and mitigate issues.

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novel positively contributes to broadening my horizons and promoting my well-being in a significant way.

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, I would recommend

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literature to my family members and friends to influence their behaviours and attitudes that may impact their happiness. Please let me know if there are

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inquiries or requirements. I look forward to hearing your feedback regarding my article. Regards, Mohamed Mahmoud

Mohamed Abdel WanisSat Oct 01 2022

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