You recently hired a contractor for painting work. The work is over but there are some complaints regarding the work. Mention in your letter : write what work was inappropriate Describe the complaints say what the contractor should do

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Dear Sir, My name is Shikha and I am living in a society named Acme heights 2, Mohali. I have hired you and your worker to paint our newly renovated house. I have a complaint regarding the work your worked did at my home.

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, the work is complete and the workers already took all the payment from us. Now we are finding out many things which are not done well like in Kitchen they didn't paint cupboards from inside.

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, they left the stains on the floor as it is. So, I am not happy about the task they have done. I would request you to come and visit our home and check all the things by yourself. You will find

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sight. It is all because of their attitude towards the work.

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, I want you to send new workers who can complete these things as soon as possible because Diwali is approaching and I have a lot of other

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to do. I hope you will take immediate action on my request. Looking forward to your positive reply. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

189 words

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You recently hired a contractor for painting work. The work is over but there are some complaints regarding the work. Mention in your letter : write what work was inappropriate Describe the complaints say what the contractor should do

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this? Angsa

More and more people nowadays visit well-known places to take photographs of themselves, without looking at tl1e place. Why do you think this is happening? Is it a positive or a negative trend? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is argued that governments should prioritize addressing environmental pollution and housing issues as a means to prevent health-related problems

Some people think that the use of mobile (cell) phones should be banned in public places such as libraries and shops and on public transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?