Write a 4-paragraph essay of about 200-250 words on the following topic: Many young people spend a lot of time on the Internet without any parental supervision or control. What are some of the problems caused by unrestricted use of the Internet and what can be done to curb these problems?

It is true that children nowadays use their

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surfing the

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without any guidance and protection from their parents.

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and how these problems can be solved. Teenagers usually spend

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indulging themselves in social media platforms and it caused problems for them. A major problem is spending hours surfing the

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affects their physical condition.

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Constantly

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one place for hours leads to the

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of young

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with eyestrain and back pain. Another issue is that it hampers social interactions. Social media platforms' algorithms like Facebook or Instagram provide endless enticing posts on their newsfeeds. Due to those algorithms, teenagers neglect

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important social skills.

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, they perform their tasks poorly in real life

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and fail to make real relationships. There are some effective solutions

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should notice.

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, parents should encourage their children to exercise more. Exercising helps to ease mental as well as physical health.

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will lower the risk of sitting for long stretches of

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, make them aware of other things.To illustrate,

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of playing games or using social media, we show them the benefits of reading books and make it appeals to them naturally. It not only reduces the

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they spend on the

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but

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help

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them to learn more about general knowledge. To summarize, there are detrimental consequences of investing too much

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in using the

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for young

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without control and management, yet they can be solved with effective solutions and more are suggested to minimize the influence of

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problem on the younger generation.