Some people think that the government should provide unemployed people with a free mobile phone and free access to the interne to help them find jobs.

Technology is developing day by day so, some habits of humanity are changing with
the
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technology. How? Let me explain, people found a
job
with
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the helping newspaper or wall hanging
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in the past. Nowadays, finding an appropriate
job
is
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process because there are too many different
job
areas and different specialist areas when
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the ten or fifty years ago. People all over the world use online or
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smart phone
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application
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such
as Linkedin and they can create an account on these applications inside in about their hobby, ability, experience, reference, academic studies etc. Technological advancement in the current world has increased the employment rate. With
this
increase, the methods of hiring have
also
evolved. Most interviews are done via mobile or email, which requires internet and phone. Especially when thinking covid19 pandemic effects, all of the
first
job
interviews have become
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online interview.
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of using
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and
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is increasing fastly so, people start
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the using of
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and
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is a basic need to find a
job
for every citizen.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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