Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of
Mr.
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Mr
Carter
's most important jobs is that of public relations director. The purpose of this
job is to establish a good attitude toward his country
among the public (people
) of the origin country
. As part of this
job, he supervises the writing and distribution of press
releases (news
stories) for the media
. Media
refers to all the ways of spreading information
, such
as newspapers, radio, television, and other means of communication. Media
is a plural word, meaning it refers to all these means. Radio is a medium of communication; it is one of the media
used for advertising. Public relations people
place special news
stories in the media
to help build interest
in the destination country
. Advertisements in the media
, paid for by the tourism department, also
help establish interest
.
Employees in public relations and advertising must be fluent in English if they work in English-speaking countries. "To be fluent" means to speak, read, and write a language almost as well as the natives do. Mr.
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Mr
Carter
's staff
members write advertisements, news
releases, and brochures to promote travel to their country
. They give lectures (talks) and show films about their country
to groups of people
. They answer questions about travel to their country
.
Mr.
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Mr
Carter
holds press
conferences whenever something of importance or interest
happens in his country
. A press
conference is a meeting attended by reporters from newspapers, magazines, radio, or television. At a press
conference, someone makes announcements that their readers, listeners, or viewers might find interesting. Whenever an important person from his country
visits, Mr.
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Mr
Carter
holds a press
conference to introduce that person to the representatives of the media
. Such
news
items help to build interest
in and knowledge about his country
.
Information
offices also
give tourists and immigrants helpful information
. The clerks give them any necessary documents or visas that may be required for entrance. The staff
can also
tell them about different laws and regulations in the destination country
.
Mr.
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Mr
Carter
and his staff
also
work with businesses and industries that might be interested in either moving to or doing business with the destination country
. Mr.
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Mr
Carter's
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Carter
country
wants foreign industries to come and help build industry there. The country
is also
interested in exporting some of its products. In turn, the country
is anxious to get the best prices on products imported from other countries.
Wherever they go and whatever they do, the information
staff
members represent their country
. "We are the face of our country
to the rest of the world," Mr.
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Mr
Carter
says. "Before they know anything about our country
, people
form their impressions and attitudes about it from the things we do and say."Submitted by bttha.qn on
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