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Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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One of
Mr.
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Carter
's most important jobs is that of public relations director. The purpose of
this
 job is to establish a good attitude toward his
country
 among the public (
people
) of the origin
country
. As part of
this
 job, he supervises the writing and distribution of
press
 releases (
news
 stories) for the
media
.
Media
 refers to all the ways of spreading
information
,
such
 as newspapers, radio, television, and other means of communication.
Media
 is a plural word, meaning it refers to all these means. Radio is a medium of communication; it is one of the
media
 used for advertising. Public relations
people
 place special
news
 stories in the
media
 to help build
interest
 in the destination
country
. Advertisements in the
media
, paid for by the tourism department,
also
 help establish
interest
. Employees in public relations and advertising must be fluent in English if they work in English-speaking countries. "To be fluent" means to speak, read, and write a language almost as well as the natives do.
Mr.
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Carter
's
staff
 members write advertisements,
news
 releases, and brochures to promote travel to their
country
. They give lectures (talks) and show films about their
country
 to groups of
people
. They answer questions about travel to their
country
.
Mr.
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Carter
 holds
press
 conferences whenever something of importance or
interest
 happens in his
country
. A
press
 conference is a meeting attended by reporters from newspapers, magazines, radio, or television. At a
press
 conference, someone makes announcements that their readers, listeners, or viewers might find interesting. Whenever an important person from his
country
 visits,
Mr.
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Carter
 holds a
press
 conference to introduce that person to the representatives of the
media
.
Such
news
 items help to build
interest
 in and knowledge about his
country
.
Information
 offices
also
 give tourists and immigrants helpful
information
. The clerks give them any necessary documents or visas that may be required for entrance. The
staff
 can
also
 tell them about different laws and regulations in the destination
country
.
Mr.
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Carter
 and his
staff
also
 work with businesses and industries that might be interested in either moving to or doing business with the destination
country
.
Mr.
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Carter's
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country
 wants foreign industries to come and help build industry there. The
country
 is
also
 interested in exporting some of its products. In turn, the
country
 is anxious to get the best prices on products imported from other countries. Wherever they go and whatever they do, the
information
staff
 members represent their
country
. "We are the face of our
country
 to the rest of the world,"
Mr.
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Carter
 says. "Before they know anything about our
country
,
people
 form their impressions and attitudes about it from the things we do and say."
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