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In the future, self-driving cars will replace human drivers. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Science and technology are growing at an exponential level ,so due to
this
, we are able to believe all think that once seem impossible are possible ,even self-driving a
car
 is one of them.Without any ,doubt self-driving machines will replace human drivers in the coming future and it has a
lot
 of pros with few cons. Humans begins are intelligent species on planet earth but we people make a
lot
 of errors knowingly or unknowingly because we are bored doing repetitive tasks on daily bases. Driving is one of them ,we need to travel from point A to point B but we tend to make accidents .To avoid
such
 kinds of scenarios a self-driving
car
 can help us. They are not that creative like us but they are good at repetitive tasks,accuracy ,precision and especially following rules.So due to ,
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 we can avoid more number accidents which are very good for our mankind as we lose a
lot
 of lives in accidents . The self-driving cars will take a few jobs, especially human drivers but they will give us a
lot
 of jobs in return , we need specific experts who could help to analyse weak points or missing points of the self-driving
car
. Due to the self-driving
car
, we could create a
lot
 of different and unique job opportunities which could help us focus on different problems rather than learning how to drive. Surprisingly few people assume that self-driving cars could create a portion of issues which create bigger troubles than our previous generations and which could lead to the end of our human civilizations.But I strongly believe that self-driving cars are not made to destroy mankind but could help us to make sure that our loved ones are safe after travelling .
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