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Some people point that experiential learning (i.e. learning by doing it) can work well in formal education. However, others think a traditional form of teaching is the best. Do you think experiential learning can work well in high schools or colleges?

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It is a truly debatable topic that experiential learning is better in comparison to regular teaching methods employed at educational institutions around the world. There are a number of benefits as well as drawbacks and some of them are discussed below. Experiential learning can help benefit more underperforming
students
 because they would incorporate learning into a memory that they had.
This
 would increase the performance of
students
 overall.
For instance
, studies have proven that 89% of
students
 ended up with better results
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 the utilization of visual and mental education.
Moreover
, learning by doing
also
 improves mental capacity and develops advanced cognitive abilities in younger children.
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 is why physical learning is often observed to be using
this
 technique
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 kindergartens.
This
 betters the younger generation with more effective knowledge.
In addition
, learning by execution leads to
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 memory.
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 has been proven in an experiment
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 researchers have conducted in the scope of
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 year. Executed learning aided 81% of
students
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 year later. The only drawback of executed education is that teachers would not have enough time to finish the syllabus given to them by the employment of
this
 method. Primarily because
this
 method of teaching requires a lot of time
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 effort given by the staff's side and
this
 would eventually demotivate the teaching staff.
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, I personally think that it's always better to employ executive learning techniques in the classroom if time permits, as it positively benefits children in a number of ways. From the discussion above, it can clearly be seen that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages,
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