Some people say that Government should break down all the historic building and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

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country
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histroic
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historic
sides and moments. There are some who
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it
less
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value and
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government
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the govenment
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govenment
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government
pull
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it down. In my opinion, these are the greatest assets of every
country
and
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citizens
cictizens
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citizens
should
respect
them.
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, if we will see that
histroic
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historic
things
are priceless
of
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their
country
.
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comes from all over the world to
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area to see their
things
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example, visitors
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comes to visit their classical building,
things
etc.
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is
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great source
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country
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to generate income. Tourists
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happy and return to their
country
back.
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people
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it
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is
the
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great
indian
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histroic
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historic
building. Indians
respect
them and can't imagine
to break
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this
building.
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increase
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income because of these old
building
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buildings
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. I agree that we should not break these historic
buildings
.
On the other hand
,
people
also
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interested to construct new modern
buildings
. Most
of
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the
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people
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no
respect
of
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their old cultural
buildings
. They want to
constract
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construct
contract
new
buildings
. They don't know the value of antique
buildings
. I
feed
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feel
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bad for these
people
and
country
because they don't know that they are
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loosing
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losing
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something valuable which they get to know
letter
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.
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, if they break all these kinds of building the
tourists
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majority decreases and the income of that
country
also
decreases.
i
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am not agree
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to build modern
buildings
instead
of old
buildings
. In conclusion, we
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explained
explanied
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explained
both sides of the essay, We should always
respect
old
things
may
it
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they
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be
buildings
,
people
etc. I agree that we should build modern
buildings
but we should not break old
buildings
as well because these old structures are
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of the
country
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • invaluable assets
  • tangible connection
  • architectural heritage
  • modernization
  • energy efficiency
  • adaptive reuse
  • historical significance
  • economic implications
  • sustainable
  • green technologies
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