You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: ■ ■ thank your friend for the holiday explain that you left your wallet in their house give them instructions of how to send it back to you

Dear Nancy, I'm just writing to tell you that
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left my purse at your place. First of all, let me thank you for
such
an amazing vacation. I can't stop thinking about
last
week that we spent together after so long. I was absolutely thrilled that I could have
such
an adventurous week with all our friends and that was possible just because of you. Actually, what happened when I was leaving your house I felt so emotional and
due to
that, I didn't even
realised
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thet
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that
I had forgotten to take my wallet
along with
me. I'd be really grateful if you could send it back. You
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find it in the right side drawer just beside the bed of
guest
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room. I know, you might think now how should I send it back to me but let me release your tension. One of my college
friend
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live near
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you, she is going to visit me next week for some work. So, you can hand over my wallet to her. All her contact details are attached to the back- side of
this
paper. sorry for the trouble, Dhauvi
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Accuracy
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Complexity
Consider using varied sentence structures to add more sophistication to your writing.
Structure
You've structured your letter well, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, following the logical flow of ideas.
Tone
Your tone is suitably friendly and polite, which is perfect for a letter to a friend.
Task Response
You've completed the task by addressing all the points in the prompt effectively.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • memorable
  • grateful
  • remarkable
  • incident
  • essential
  • postage
  • courier
  • identification
  • reimburse
  • parcel
  • delivery method
  • anticipate
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