Government should be used to support children in school for sports rather than to support professional sports and arts that perform for the general public. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Nowadays
sport
is one of the main subject
in our life. Whereas Change to a plural noun
subjects
ones
state that the country's state agencies should support professional Correct pronoun usage
some
sport
others on Fix the agreement mistake
sports
Correct article usage
the other
other hand claim
that Change the wording
another hand claim
other hand claims
sport
should be introduced and funded in Fix the agreement mistake
sports
schools
. I agree to high
extent that Add an article
the high
a high
sport
should be funded at schools
because this
is a motivation for high professional degree sports
and also
raise healthy
population.
Correct article usage
a healthy
Firstly
, sports
at educational centres such
schools
raise Change preposition
as schools
future
champions. For instance
, if pupils at schools
often
involved in Add a missing verb
are often
sports
activities and competitions funded by the government they will become professionally skilful and experts in the future
. This
also
provides a
confidence and a high discipline for Remove the article
apply
schools'
children participating in Change noun form
schools
sports
actively. In addition
, a budget being spent for sport
at educational places will assist in obtaining Fix the agreement mistake
sports
sport
equipment Change the noun form
sports
with
high and good quality so that a child can enjoy Change preposition
of
in
getting Change preposition
apply
in
Change preposition
into
sport
. So, students will be more sport oriented
and Add a hyphen
sport-oriented
high
- disciplined so that Replace the word
highly
this
definitely can make country's
champions and even Olympic participants in the Correct article usage
the country's
future
.
Secondly
,sports
at school means
Correct subject-verb agreement
mean
healthy
population who are mentally and physically wealthy and healthy . Correct article usage
a healthy
For example
, exercises or trainings
will make Change the wording
training
pieces of training
schools '
students resistant to any illness and Change noun form
schools
be
strong and tolerant.Unnecessary verb
apply
Moreover
, mental health acquired from Add an article
the sport
sport
will motivate pupils to study well and inspire them to get high achievements not only in Fix the agreement mistake
sports
sports
but also
in education.Thus
, sports
Correct your spelling
definitely
definelty
will stimulate good health along with magnificent mental health without any disorder.
Correct your spelling
definitely
Finally
, it is obvious that professional sports
are very popular and well funded by the country's administration. However
, others state that the authority should support sport
activities in Change the noun form
sports
schools
. I totally agrees
with Change the verb form
agree
this
statement due to achievements in future
high
qualified tournaments and competition the victory will be gained easily and smoothly if Replace the word
highly
sports
is one of the main subject
during school studies. Change to a plural noun
subjects
Also
a healthy society with good mental abilities is one of the prosperous Add a comma
,Also
future
bric
-à-brac of Change the capitalization
Bric
sport
activities.So, the Change the noun form
sports
Correct your spelling
government
goervenment
should pay more attention to Correct your spelling
government
schools
' sport
life if they want to raise Change the noun form
sports
right
generation.Correct article usage
the right
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