Government should be used to support children in school for sports rather than to support professional sports and arts that perform for the general public. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays

sport

is one of the main

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in our life. Whereas

ones

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state that the country's state agencies should support professional

sport

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others on

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other hand claim

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that

sport

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sports

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should be introduced and funded in

schools

. I agree to

high

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extent that

sport

should be funded at

schools

because

this

is a motivation for high professional degree

sports

and

also

raise

healthy

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population.

Firstly

,

sports

at educational centres

such

schools

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raise

future

champions.

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, if pupils at

schools

often

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involved in

sports

activities and competitions funded by the government they will become professionally skilful and experts in the

future

.

This

also

provides

a

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confidence and a high discipline for

schools'

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children participating in

sports

actively.

In addition

, a budget being spent for

sport

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at educational places will assist in obtaining

sport

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equipment

with

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high and good quality so that a child can enjoy

in

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getting

in

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sport

. So, students will be more

sport oriented

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and

high

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- disciplined so that

this

definitely can make

country's

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champions and even Olympic participants in the

future

.

Secondly

,

sports

at school

means

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healthy

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population who are mentally and physically wealthy and healthy .

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, exercises or

trainings

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will make

schools '

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students resistant to any illness and

be

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strong and tolerant.

Moreover

, mental health acquired from

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the sport

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sport

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will motivate pupils to study well and inspire them to get high achievements not only in

sports

but

also

in education.

Thus

,

sports

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definitely

definelty

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definitely

will stimulate good health along with magnificent mental health without any disorder.

Finally

, it is obvious that professional

sports

are very popular and well funded by the country's administration.

However

, others state that the authority should support

sport

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activities in

schools

. I totally

agrees

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with

this

statement due to achievements in

future

high

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qualified tournaments and competition the victory will be gained easily and smoothly if

sports

is one of the main

subject

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during school studies.

Also

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a healthy society with good mental abilities is one of the prosperous

future

bric

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-à-brac of

sport

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activities.So, the

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government

goervenment

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government

should pay more attention to

schools

'

sport

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life if they want to raise

right

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generation.