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University students are increasingly studying abroad as a part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays studying abroad is an extremely common phenomenon among
students
 as a part of their studies.
Although
 studying abroad opens up enormous opportunities for advanced education and significant
life
 experience,
this
 might cost them more than usual compared to their native
country
also
 it can cause linguistic and cultural difficulties in their daily
life
. In my opinion, despite facing challenges receiving a degree from a foreign
country
 is worth enough for future
endeavors
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. Studying abroad gives chance
students
 to come out of their comfort zone and gain
life
 experience for their careers.
This
also
 allows them to develop their people skills which might not be as simple as in their homeland.
Firstly
, moving to a different
country
 for study purposes opens up mainly cultural and linguistic challenges which are different from the usual experience they have. Adjusting to a new
country
 takes a good amount of time.
For instance
, migrating to a new place impacts the whole living pattern of a person’s
life
 and in most cases,
students
 are far away from their families so it impacts their lives both physically and emotionally. So to say, migrating to a new environment includes significant experiences that will lead them to blend in with people from different backgrounds in their careers. Moving to a foreign
country
 for higher education can cost higher as the currencies are different. It is highly competitive to get a scholarship in a whole new
country
 and it is quite difficult to afford for many
students
.
Also
, it takes much more living expenses than usual. As
students
 might take a good amount of time to blend in with the culture, sometimes it can be depressing enough to hamper their studies.
For example
, one of my friends migrated to Germany for his
Ph.D
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. It took him almost a year to learn their language properly
as a result
 there were times when he made a fool of himself while expressing himself to the Germans.
Also
, he had to work two jobs to afford his tuition and living expense. To conclude, the rate of
students
 studying abroad has increased over the years
nevertheless
 it comes with a bunch of unusual difficulties which ultimately lead them to a brighter future and a successful career. In
this
 way, the advantages of studying abroad outperform the disadvantages.
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