It is essential for children to learn what is right and what is wrong at an early age; punishment is necessary to help them understand the distinction. To what extent do you agree? What sort of punishment should be given?

Children
should be taught good
behaviour
when growing up to instil values to know right from wrong. Commonly, punishment is used to discipline
children
for bad
behaviour
. While I agree that some
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ought to be given at times, there are rather better ways of teaching them virtues to bring self-discipline. On the one hand, some of the methods of how a
child
should be punished are,
firstly
, losing privilege.
In other words
, decrease pocket money given to the
child
by restricting screening
time
, playing online games, and watching cartoons on Netflix.
Moreover
,
parents
can engage their
children
in some form of physical activity which diverts their minds.
For instance
,
parents
can involve
children
in games
such
as running around, doing a few push-ups, backyard gardening and household chores.
Finally
, punishing a
child
via a
time
out whenever they get to sit in the corner, remaining quiet and at the same
time
reflecting on their bad
behaviour
because of their discipline.
On the other hand
, rewarding the
child
for their good
behaviour
by giving them incentives
such
as giving them small treats (Mac Donald’s), buying them their favourite toys and taking them to the cinema. Praise them for their good
behaviour
by giving them acknowledgement notes and a tap on their back and sharing their achievements with other family members and friends.
Nevertheless
,
parents
upskill their offspring by teaching them virtues so that the
child
is holistically developed and moulded.
Additionally
, having a private tutor at home for at least an hour can
also
be an advantage to boost the
child
’s academic performance and, at the same
time
, keep the
child
occupied. In conclusion, the introduction of desirable
behaviour
is expected
hence
prior
time
management is essential for a
child
’s development physically, cognitively and emotionally.
Further
,
parents
need to spend quality
time
with their
children
to maintain focus and judge their overall performance.
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