You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

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Respected sir, I am a student in your evening class for advanced data analysis . I feel very fortunate and delighted to learn under your guidance.

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, I cannot continue

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course because I have been transferred to Delhi by the company

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work with. I took

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study in order to fulfil my future professional aspirations and

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really want to continue it,

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request that you can provide me with a letter of recommendation that would help me to pursue the course in Delhi itself.

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would be able to continue my studies. I hope you would consider my request. Looking forward to a positive revert from you. Yours sincerely

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

114 words

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