In many countries it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that

alcohol

-promoting advertisements should be banned and some countries have already decided to consider

such

advertisements as illegal activities.

This

essay absolutely agrees with

this

decision, because those adverts impose the wrong perception of being cool for the younger generation and

also

hinder the process of giving up the

alcohol

addiction for those who are trying to quit it. It is a known fact that repetitive activities

such

as showing

alcohol

-related ads on the media can impose a wrong understanding of what is considered to be “cool” and “fancy”. Over popularizing all sorts of unhealthy beverages

such

as beer, wine and spirits can lead to young and fragile adolescent minds being influenced by the idea that

alcohol

is a trend, and is a part of modern society, and it is a cool thing to consume. Which can certainly lead to serious issues in the long run.

For example

, as per the latest survey results due to the

alcohol

commercials, consumption of these products increased by 20% in Europe which in my opinion is a very disconcerting and disturbing growth of wrong trends. Apart from ,

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there is another very important issue that should be considered when it comes to

alcohol

promotion and

that is

the fact that it seriously makes it difficult for those who are trying to give up the bad habit of addictive boozing. Because as per my understanding it is always easier to avoid temptation rather than

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to resist it. And those adverts make it almost impossible to not think about it when it is constantly popping up everywhere in the media.

For instance

, there is research that was conducted in the

alcohol

addiction clinic at the University of California.

This

clearly proved that

alcohol

-addicted candidates that participated in

this

research were prone to go back to their previous habits if they were tempted by reminders of the

alcohol

during the day. In conclusion, it is certain that advertisements can impose wrong ideas on teenagers and younger minds as well as

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can influence

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adults who have

alcohol

-related issues in terms of giving up bad habits.

Therefore

, I agree and support the idea of making

alcohol

adverts illegal.