Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and your opinion.

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In
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competitive world, many administrators believe that the most significant objective for
the nations progress
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the nation's progress
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is
their
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its
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economical growth.
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, some individuals opine that the additional types of
progresses
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progress
signs of progress
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such
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as education and
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environment are
also
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considered to be indispensable for the
countries
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country's
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overall development. I personally believe that all different types of
progresses
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progress
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are equally responsible for contributing
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countries
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country's
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development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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