Write a letter to your a property estate agency

I am writing to request assistance to find suitable accommodation as we are relocating to Lusaka in three months’ time. We are a family of four

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my parents, a brother aged 10 and our helper. We are known as the Benhura family and we are originally from Zimbabwe. I will be grateful if you can find us a four-bedroom property with at least two bathrooms, a well-furnished open-plan kitchen and a spacious dining area.

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, the house should be fenced preferable with an electric fence to make it more secure. Apart from

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, there should be a borehole to cater for any disruptions in the water supply. We are ready to pay $1,000 per calendar month which should

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cater for bills. The house should be located in the heart of Lusaka where there is a good transport system. It would be great if there is a school nearby to accommodate my brother. Please feel free to contact me

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+263773 498678 if you have any

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questions. I am looking forward to hearing back from you Yours faithfully, Audrey

marthapriscandhlovu

Oct 4, 2022

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The Greeting

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Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

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Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

183 words

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Write a letter to your a property estate agency

The Greeting

Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does the shortage of fresh water cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Some believe that living in an apartment are advantageous, but other argue it in contrast. Discuss both views.