Wealthy nations should assist poor countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters Do you agree or disagree.

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It is considered that rich
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ought to provide underdeveloped nations with humanitarian relief during a natural disaster.
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essay agrees with the statement because poor regions are lacking financial resources and
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poor medical facilities to recoup on their own.
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with, poor
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are facing a lack of financial resources as these
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may earn below the poverty line
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they do not have enough funds to provide
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during rainy days. Whereas, the developed nation has ample financial reserve due to their strong economy resulting in them can support if any natural disaster occurs as
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will show rich
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love and care
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poor nations.
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, recent hurricane in Nepal
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numerous houses were blown away and the United States of America’s President came upfront and sent his soldiers and engineers to rebuild shelter for affected families which is one of the basic needs.
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, during flooding, numerous agricultural products are destroyed so these people face
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shortages and left in hunger
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normally the rich
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step up and provide them with basic
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clothing and children’s stuff (diapers, baby milk and tin
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) as
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demonstrates their moral obligation.
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, underdeveloped
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have poor medical facilities and always a shortage of medications. While there is already a shortage of medication and when mother nature occurs immediate medical attention is required for mothers about to give birth, sickly, elderly people or those injured in natural disasters and if no immediate attention is provided the country may lose a lot of their population. The
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hurricane in Fiji,
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destroyed many small islands where they sought urgent medical
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which made
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like Australia,
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Zealand take immediate action and deployed their doctors and nurses with medication on these islands to contribute
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. In conclusion, it is indeed great
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that is
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required to poor
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during a natural disaster in terms of
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and medical
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to meet basic needs
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as help from the rich
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displaying their kindness, care and support to the poor nation when the need arises.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Humanitarian relief
  • Infrastructure
  • Global solidarity
  • Disproportionately
  • External assistance
  • Rebuilding efforts
  • Disaster response
  • Investment in stability
  • Dependency theory
  • Responsible intervention
  • Paternalistic
  • Shared humanity
  • Sovereignty
  • Capabilities
  • Fatality rates
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