Wealthy nations should assist poor countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters Do you agree or disagree.
It is considered that rich
countries
ought to provide underdeveloped nations with humanitarian relief during a natural disaster. Use synonyms
This
essay agrees with the statement because poor regions are lacking financial resources and Linking Words
has
poor medical facilities to recoup on their own.
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have
To begin
with, poor Linking Words
countries
are facing a lack of financial resources as these Use synonyms
countries
may earn below the poverty line Use synonyms
therefore
they do not have enough funds to provide Linking Words
assistance
during rainy days. Whereas, the developed nation has ample financial reserve due to their strong economy resulting in them can support if any natural disaster occurs as Use synonyms
this
will show rich Linking Words
countries
love and care Use synonyms
to
poor nations. Change preposition
for
For example
, recent hurricane in Nepal Linking Words
consequently
numerous houses were blown away and the United States of America’s President came upfront and sent his soldiers and engineers to rebuild shelter for affected families which is one of the basic needs. Linking Words
Moreover
, during flooding, numerous agricultural products are destroyed so these people face Linking Words
food
shortages and left in hunger Use synonyms
and
normally the rich Correct word choice
apply
countries
step up and provide them with basic Use synonyms
food
clothing and children’s stuff (diapers, baby milk and tin Use synonyms
food
) as Use synonyms
this
demonstrates their moral obligation.
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On the other hand
, underdeveloped Linking Words
countries
have poor medical facilities and always a shortage of medications. While there is already a shortage of medication and when mother nature occurs immediate medical attention is required for mothers about to give birth, sickly, elderly people or those injured in natural disasters and if no immediate attention is provided the country may lose a lot of their population. The Use synonyms
last
hurricane in Fiji, Linking Words
it
destroyed many small islands where they sought urgent medical Correct pronoun usage
apply
assistance
which made Use synonyms
countries
like Australia, Use synonyms
New
Zealand take immediate action and deployed their doctors and nurses with medication on these islands to contribute Correct word choice
and New
assistance
.
In conclusion, it is indeed great Use synonyms
assistance
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that is
required to poor Linking Words
countries
during a natural disaster in terms of Use synonyms
food
and medical Use synonyms
assistance
to meet basic needs Use synonyms
such
as help from the rich Linking Words
countries
displaying their kindness, care and support to the poor nation when the need arises.Use synonyms
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