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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disaster. Do you agree or disagree?

#nations #countries #relief #disaster
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It is argued that rich
countries
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 should provide relief assistance to underdeveloped or developing
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 following a natural disaster.
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 essay will discuss why I agree with
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 statement because these
countries
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 have a moral obligation and the financial resources to do so.
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, natural disasters often lead to a shortage of food and medical supplies.
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, people suffer and can
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 die due to outbreaks of diseases and lack of nutrition.
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, the wealthier
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 can assist with emergency relief,
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 as food, water, and medicines.
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, during the recent major earthquake in Tonga that caused widespread destruction, including contamination of water sources, the Australian Government provided immediate humanitarian assistance by flying in emergency supplies to help the Tongan people in need.
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, Western
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 have the necessary funds and big financial budgets to provide
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 assistance. Poor
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 do have the money to rebuild the damaged areas and help their people in need. Without aid from these donor
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, these
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 will be unable to rebuild essential infrastructures,
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 as school buildings, hospitals, roads and other public facilities.
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,
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 can cause significant economic and health problems for these
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 without financial support from the developed regional partners. Following the aftermath of Cyclone Winston in Fiji (the strongest Category 5 cyclone over the past decade), which wiped out almost one-
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 of the economy, hundreds of millions of dollars in aid was received to help rebuild the nation. In conclusion, there will be a lot more suffering in the world if the rich
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, given their vast financial reserves, do not play their role in assisting the needy disaster-affected
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 and I,
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, believe, that they need to come forward to help during
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 catastrophic events.
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