Some people believe that the salaries paid to professional sportspeople are too high, while others argue that sports salaries are fair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has become a highly controversial issue that professional
athletes
are considered to be paid higher numbers than they deserve.In my opinion, I completely agree that
athletes
deserve to be paid more, and in
this
,article we will discuss both points of view. On the one hand,
athletes
do not create a lot of jobs or tangible benefits for society and individuals.
For example
, CEOs or businessmen get rich because they create a lot of positions for other people. Professional musicians make money by attracting people to concerts.
In contrast
, certain
athletes
have difficulty getting people to pay to watch them compete,
such
as in weightlifting, and they do not create a lot of jobs for society.
On the other hand
, wages are paid by the market, and it is a purely market-based act. Many
athletes
earn high salaries by attracting large audiences,
such
as soccer players.
In addition
, advertisers tend to invite
athletes
to endorse products, which is the main way player earn and
further
makes brand awareness and sales increase, allowing these companies to create more jobs, which is a non-direct way to contribute to the country's economy. In general, the high salaries paid to
athletes
are a natural phenomenon in a free economic society and it is a form of success that should be respected by everyone.
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