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The best way to reduce crime amongst young people is to teach parents good parenting skills. Do you agree or disagree?

#crime #people #parents #skills
Crime, the most vulnerable act, is becoming common in
this
 era. It is believed by some individuals that the parents play an important role in nourishing and developing
etiquattes
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etiquettes
etiquette
 among their
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children
childrens
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children
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 that may result in crime reduction. According to my point of view,
this
 aforementioned statement holds a valid point and I totally agree with it. In
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Firstly
, if the parents have proper guidance,
how
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 to treat their off-springs at the early ages of their growth,
then
 the new generation will arise having
kind
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 heart and
humanity
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 nature. So, the supervision of
guardian
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 proves beneficial in
psychological
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 as well as mental development of their
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child's
child
childs
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children
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.
That is
 the reason, guardians should be trained properly.
Hence
, there should be proper institutes to
taught
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 elder ones
about
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how to deal with their babies after their birth. The other thing is some training sessions should be essential for every citizen, based on citizenship, which will deliver lessons
how
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 to care
their
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for their
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 residence place properly.
Thus
, it would be
in
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their
responsibilities
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 to make a world free of crime, ignorance and hatred.
Moreover
, everyone would be able to choose
right
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 option, rather than performing offensive things. In the
nut-shell
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,
parents
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parents'
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behavior
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behaviour
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 and
citizen's
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citizens'
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 responsibilities can be effective for upgrading the nature of descendants in order to reduce illegal acts.
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