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Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the world, particularly in thier contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

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In contemporary society, There are many vital problems that humans must face
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 essay will discuss the detail that why global warming become a serious problem and the suggestion from my opinion. In contemporary society, There are many vital
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, especially global warming,
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 essay will discuss the detail that why global warming become a serious
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 and the suggestion from my opinion. In contemporary society, There are many vital
problem
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problems
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 that
human
Fix the agreement mistake
humans
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 must
faced
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face
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to
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apply
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, especially global warming,
this
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 essay will discuss the detail that why global warming become a serious
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problem
proble
Correct your spelling
problem
,
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apply
show examples
 and the suggestion from my opinion.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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