Governemnts should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Nowadays, we can travel to another place in several ways,
for example
, going by car on the road
or about to the station to take a train. Some people
said that governments
ought to spend money
on railways
more than roads
. In my opinion, I fully disagree with Change preposition
on roads
this
idea because of the purpose of the road
and the budget.
Undeniably, the number of road
users always is
increased. Not only car users, but Unnecessary verb
apply
also
walkers are increased. In other words
, roads
are more multipurpose than railways
. For instance
, in Thailand, governments
tried to invest in trains more than roads
. However
, Thai roads
have many problems such
as fragile roads
, the consequence is vicious travel on the road
. For example
, people
can arrive at another place by walking faster than by car . Thus
, governments
should spend money
on roads
more than on railways
.
In contrast
, railways
are able to improve congestion problems on roads
because people
are turning to use railways
increasingly. However
, the railway cost is more expensive than the road
cost. It would be conspicuous consumption that leads to the monetary problem. For example
, in Thailand, governments
were spending money
on railways
too much. The consequence is that trains was
barely improved. Change the verb form
were
Thus
, the government ought to plan about spending the monetary government carefully when they are thinking to invest in railways
.
To conclude, roads
are more important than railways
because of the road
's purpose. The cost, which is used for railways
, is expensive. That is
the reason why I fully disagree with people
saying that governments
should spend money
on railways
instead
of roads
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