Governemnts should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Nowadays, we can travel to another place in several ways,

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, going by car on the

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or about to the station to take a train. Some

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said that

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ought to spend

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railways

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more than

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roads

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. In my opinion, I fully disagree with

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idea because of the purpose of the

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and the budget. Undeniably, the number of

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users always

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increased. Not only car users, but

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walkers are increased.

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roads

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are more multipurpose than

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, in Thailand,

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tried to invest in trains more than

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, Thai

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have many problems

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as fragile

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, the consequence is vicious travel on the

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people

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can arrive at another place by walking faster than by car .

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governments

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should spend

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roads

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more than on

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In contrast

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are able to improve congestion problems on

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because

people

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are turning to use

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increasingly.

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, the railway cost is more expensive than the

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cost. It would be conspicuous consumption that leads to the monetary problem.

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, in Thailand,

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were spending

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railways

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too much. The consequence is that trains

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barely improved.

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, the government ought to plan about spending the monetary government carefully when they are thinking to invest in

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. To conclude,

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are more important than

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because of the

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's purpose. The cost, which is used for

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, is expensive.

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the reason why I fully disagree with

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saying that

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should spend

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railways

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instead

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roads

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

268 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

sustainable transport
carbon footprint
commuter congestion
interconnectivity
public infrastructure
operational costs
mass transit
urban development
energy efficiency
socio-economic disparities
heritage railways
tourist attractions
environmental conservation
urban sprawl
renewable energy
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infrastructure investment
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public-private partnership
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Nowadays, many people find it difficult to balance their work and personal lives. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees achieve a better work-life balance?

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you have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that we booked by the organiser of a company. write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include, details about the meeting, the problem you face and what should be done.