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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everthing they want online without paying To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
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Due to the drastic increase in
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 people prefer to access news on the internet for free because of
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 no individuals will buy
books
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 or
newspapers
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 in the future.Accessing
data
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 will be easy, all the
data
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 in one place and very easy to carry.The essay is going to explain why some believe online
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 but it
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 explains the importance of
newspapers
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 or
books
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.The given statement is contradicting my opinion. some use online
information
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 because they can get the details with a single click and the
data
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 is in the form of videos which
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 makes them comfortable and easy to understand.
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, while watching videos if they want to share with their family members ,friends or relatives they can share.videos can gather
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 and makes them visualize the
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 for a better understanding of the
data
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.
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, A lot of families still prefer
newspapers
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 because all the
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 about cooking,sports, sharemarkets,movies,
technology
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 and many more topics
data
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 is present in one place.
In addition
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 to
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newspapers
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 or
books
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 can be portable
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, If individuals want to read the newspaper they can carry it with them and can read it whenever they want.
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, still some wait for a newspaper in the morning before their day gets started.Newspaper can improves knowledge and
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 helps them to keep up to date with all the content
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 is very important in today's fast world. In conclusion, All the
Information
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 is present on the internet for free so individuals will stop buying
books
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 or
newspapers
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.
Newspapers
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 can't be replaced by
technology
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 even though they are a lot of updates and improvements in
technology
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 because
newspapers
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 have a lot of benefits compared with the
information
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 present on the internet
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 as easy to carry,correct
data
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, all the
information
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 together and with fewer distractions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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