Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, Believe that school is the place to learn this. Discussion both these views and give your own opinion.
It is widely believed that
parents
are the only ones who are responsible for teaching their offspring how to be good members of society. In contrast
, others think that school is the best place to do it. This
essay checks the validity of both viewpoints and presents my own opinion.
Although
parents
' impact is actually essential in forming a child's worldview, parents
are not practically capable of teaching their child since he is not always present at home and they simply can not control him. Moreover
, even when they are at home, they are not able to properly teach him because of their love. For example
, parents
love their children
and they can not just punish them, while
teachers do not really care and will do everything fairly.
In contrast
, luckily, schools exist and I think that it is the most suitable place. Nevertheless
, by behaving badly, people who surround you will tell you that it is not appropriate to do so, fostering you to age and understand everything faster. Additionally
, nowadays, there is an increasing amount of courses and videos that also
help children
to develop. For instance
, recent research showed that children
who were taught at school are more adequate than those who were not.
In conclusion, despite the fact that parents
' impact is actually essential, I truly believe that schools are actually the best places to educate children
because of the atmosphere there which will foster their development. Every day spent at school adds up to the cumulative effect and influences kids and it results in their better behavior.Submitted by shermadovs on
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task achievement
Ensure that your points are fully developed and supported with detailed reasoning or examples. This will make your argument more compelling and demonstrate your point more clearly.
coherence cohesion
Avoid phrases like 'checks the validity' which can be simplified to aid clarity. Use more precise language and link your ideas smoothly.
coherence cohesion
The essay includes a clear introduction and conclusion, effectively framing the discussion.
task achievement
You have managed to explore both views and present a personal opinion clearly, which is key to fulfilling the task requirements.