In many workplaces, online communication is becoming more commonplace than face-to-face meetings. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Communication via
internet
is becoming more popular in modern life. Employees Correct article usage
the internet
is
choosing online communication in many workplaces, rather Change the verb form
are
that
meeting face to face. Correct your spelling
than
Although
it can be beneficial and time saving
working online, I think, there Add a hyphen
time-saving
is
small cons that should be taken Change the verb form
are
in
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into
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consideration
concederation
.
There are two major positive sides Correct your spelling
consideration
on
line working. Change preposition
to
Firstly
, it can be save
Change the verb form
save
ones
spending. It is obvious that travel to the requires Fix the agreement mistake
one
certain
amount of budget: fee for Change the article
a certain
bus
ticket or pay for Add an article
a bus
taxi
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a taxi
the taxi
,
if there is a distance between Remove the comma
apply
workplayes
and worker, and money for having a Correct your spelling
workplaces
workplace
luch
or dinner. Correct your spelling
lunch
Therefore
, those who works
via Change the verb form
work
internet
should not worry about these expenditures. Add an article
the internet
Secondly
, working online is timing saving. For example
, that time
which a
employee should Change the article
an
had
spent on Change the verb form
have
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the go
go
to and from work, would not have been spent, Wrong verb form
going
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except
exept
in that Correct your spelling
except
time
the employee can have a relax. Taking into account these views, I believe, working remotely via internet
has more Add an article
the internet
the
advantages.
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apply
On the contrary
, there are small parts which should be thought.
Online working means, a worker Change preposition
about.
need
a good Correct subject-verb agreement
needs
internet
connection to interract
with other colleges. If there is Correct your spelling
interact
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an
and
Correct your spelling
an
internet
outage while communication
, it can delay a working process. Replace the word
communicating
Furthermore
, those who works
in multinational companies may suffer Change the verb form
work
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from
fron
a different Correct your spelling
from
time
zone. For example
, those who Correct your spelling
work
wrok
from Japan may not Correct your spelling
work
be work
with those who Change the verb form
work
connected
from the USA. Indeed, these factors might not Add a missing verb
are connected
be bring
a serious outcome, especially in developed or Change the verb form
bring
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underdeveloped
under developed
countries, but Correct your spelling
underdeveloped
it
can cause discomfort Correct pronoun usage
they
from
those who work remotely via Change preposition
for
internet
from Add an article
the internet
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the countrysides
countrysides
.
To sum up, Fix the agreement mistake
countryside
although
working via internet
can have small cons, I think due to spending and Add an article
the internet
time
saving, the advantages outweight
the disadvantages.Correct your spelling
outweigh
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