In many workplaces, online communication is becoming more commonplace than face-to-face meetings. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Communication via
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is becoming more popular in modern life. Employees
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choosing online communication in many workplaces, rather
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than
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meeting face to face.
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it can be beneficial and
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time saving
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working online, I think, there
is
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small cons that should be taken
in
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consideration
concederation
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consideration
. There are two major positive sides
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line working.
Firstly
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, it can
be save
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ones
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spending. It is obvious that travel to the requires
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amount of budget: fee for
bus
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ticket or pay for
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if there is a distance between
workplayes
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workplaces
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and worker, and money for having a
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lunch
or dinner.
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, those who
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via
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should not worry about these expenditures.
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, working online is timing saving.
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, that
time
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which
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employee should
had
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spent on
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go
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to and from work, would not have been spent,
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except
exept
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except
in that
time
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the employee can have a relax. Taking into account these views, I believe, working remotely via
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internet
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has more
the
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advantages.
On the contrary
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, there are small parts which should be thought
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Online working means, a worker
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a good
internet
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connection to
interract
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interact
with other colleges. If there is
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and
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internet
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outage while
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, it can delay a working process.
Furthermore
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, those who
works
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in multinational companies may suffer
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from
fron
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from
a different
time
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zone.
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, those who
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work
wrok
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work
from Japan may not
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with those who
connected
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from the USA. Indeed, these factors might not
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a serious outcome, especially in developed or
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under developed
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countries, but
it
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can cause discomfort
from
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those who work remotely via
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from
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the countrysides
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countrysides
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. To sum up,
although
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working via
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internet
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can have small cons, I think due to spending and
time
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saving, the advantages
outweight
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outweigh
the disadvantages.
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