Some people think that man’s relationship with animals has changed throughout ages and the use of them in human’s life in the modern era is totally different from what it used to be. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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some that in

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contemporary world the relationship between

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and

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changed in respect of

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. In fact, I completely agree that the usage of

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in

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life

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less or negligible.

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essay will provide notions that the

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have another source of transport rather than animal as well as animal

use

in medical treatment as compared to personal

use

.

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, the main reason I believe that in

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new technological world people have several modes of transport from one place to another. Traditionally

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use

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an animal

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animal

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to travel from one point to another place. Indeed, it is obvious that science

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an important role in the advancement of

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system

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a person can travel by air from one country to another just in

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hours. Alternatively, electric cars

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in

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respect

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cheap as well as with no air pollution.

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, with all these amenities

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have

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ability to travel fast and in less time. Another point to consider is that

animal

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could be used for medical research and

traetments

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treatments

.

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is due to the fact that as per scientist stance,

animals

are playing the best part in

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research

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,

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when

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new medicines for ailments

before that

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they prefer to

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new medicines on

animals

. To conclude, I vehemently believe that the usage of

animals

in

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life totally changed as compared to traditionally due to technological factors. Not only does it

use

for entertainment in

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zoo

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but it

also

use

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in medical research.