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Essay topics: The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree?

#topics #government #sciences #subjects #country #progress
Although
marketing
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of
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a
product
 is
a
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 important task, that helps in increasing the sales of the
product
.
However
, some of these
campaign's
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campaigns
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 are immoral and
breaks
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 the normal boundaries of
the
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society. I partially agree with the statement. On one hand
advertisement
 of a
product
 leaves a positive impact on the mind of the buyer, and
on the other
hand
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 sometimes these advertisements
leaves
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 a negative effective crossing all of the unspoken boundaries.
A society
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 runs on a certain set of rules, and ads are
the
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part of the society so
same
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 rules apply
on
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 them
to
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. Despite
this
 sometimes corporation uses
such
 underhand techniques which are not acceptable.
For example
, recently a clothing store released
as
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an
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ad
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an ad
the ad
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, in which
children's
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children
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 are wearing clothes
wore
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 by adults on daily basis, and some of these costumes were
overexposive
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overexposed
overexposure
 for kids.
Thus
 making the
advertisement
no
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not
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 ethical and
destroyed
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 the unspoken boundaries.
However
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this
 is not the case with other advertisements. In most cases
there
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their
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 intention is to make us aware
about
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of
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 the products and why
there
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their
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 products are different
,
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 because there are
thousand
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companies
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of companies
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 that are
on
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in
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the
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a
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 similar business, it is the
advertisement
 of a
product
 that
make
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 it different from the others.
For example
, there are many variations of noodles in the market
of
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in
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india
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India
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, but
maggi
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 is still at the top because of the way it is advertised.
Therefore
, every
advertisement
 is not unacceptable there are
few
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a few
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 cases
yes
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, but it does not apply
on
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to
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 every
product
. So it is the creativity of the
designing
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 team that makes the
advertisement
 what they are and these unauthenticated and unacceptable methods should not be entertained.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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