It is anatural process for animals to become extinct there os no reason why people should try and avoid this happening do you agree or disagree

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in the

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.Truly, it is the natural

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behind the

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of many

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.While society plays a vital

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to save endangered

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argument . To commence with , the

species

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are diminished by deforestation. To illustrate, by cutting down

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the animal

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is removed so they can,t breed that's why they suddenly exit from the earth.

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, the population of society is rising and they need more food and fuel

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they turned the

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to agricultural use .

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to that , the type of specie may extinct because of illegal hunting .The major crime in the

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is the pouching of

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activity for recreation , enjoyment and for memory adventure .

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Tasmanian tiger was killed by a man in Queensland in 2015 . On contrary , the creatures are on the edge of

extinction

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because of natural

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, environmental

change

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and migration . To elaborate, many types of

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have died through natural accidents in the

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۔most kinds of

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like earthquakes, volcanoes and floods contribute to

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death

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, when the environment varies

species

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migrate from one ocean to another so in their travelling they might die .if someone safely reached their desired destination they do not get suitable

habitat

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.they need super

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for their reproduction

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. It can be concluded , that animaNowadays, many

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are on the verge of

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in the

world

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.Truly, it is the natural

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behind

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extinction

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of many

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humans play

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role

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to save endangered

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by trying some

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argument . To commence with , the

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diminished

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deforestation. To illustrate, by

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the animal

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is removed so they can,t breed that's why

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, the population of

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and they need more food and fuel

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they turned the

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agricultural use .

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to that , the type of specie may extinct because of illegal hunting .The major crime in the

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is the pouching of

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animals

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activity for recreation , enjoyment and for memory adventure .

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tasmanian

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tiger was killed by a man in Queensland in 2015 . On contrary , the creatures are on the edge of

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because of natural

disasters

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,

environment

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and migration . To elaborate,

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are died

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in the

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like

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death

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travelling they might die .if someone safely reached

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their desired destination they

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get suitable

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reproduction

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. It can be concluded ,

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animals

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extinct

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extend

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cut the

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and do illegal hunting but

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ups and down

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in

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