Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more diadvantages?

In our modern life,the majority of individuals expand more and more

moment

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at their

employed

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and staying without any

hours

and staying without any

hours

for entertainment. In my opinion,

this

situation has more detrimental side than advantageous from both personal and

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society's

sociaty's

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perspectives.In

this

essay,I will examine both pros and cons of

this

conversial

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conversion

controversial

issue. There are a number of significant benefits of working more and more

hours

and one of them is that individuals can create more working outcomes.It means that they can acquire more experience which can create more returns.To illuminate,even after the coworkers have left to go amusement some assistants still

pWhen

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when

the level of businessmen increases, there will be competition between them, and

as a result

, they will devote even more of their little time to their profession,

that is

, they will work harder and

therefore

bring more benefits to the country's economy For

inctence

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instance

,when the level of businessmen increases, there will be competition between them, and

as a result

, they will devote even more of their moments to their profession,

that is

, they will complete challenging tasks and

therefore

bring more benefits to the country's economy. Turning to the other side of the argument the downside of

this

is that it leads to uncompromising life and job progress.

Such

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schedule

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increase the chance of

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health

helth

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health

issues.

In particular

, lack of personal time

cause

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an extremely stressful psychological condition that lowers people's ability to perform effectively.Take an example,the company where my father

earn

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gives more and more mission to the employees of the company,and

therefore

my father sometimes because of

this

has to stay in the firm,and

than

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then

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the

next

day

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this

lead

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to negative effects that

makes

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him exhausted. In conclusion,I

conced

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concede

concur

conceded

that the cause of staying with a

little

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hours

for leisure activities and spending the whole era at the corporation

outweigh

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the pros.There is nothing in the world

mor

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more

for

prescious

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precious

than one's health.