Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycle is better. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
Travelling around the bustling,
traffic congested
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traffic-congested
city
is somewhat challenging and frustrating. Some argue that taking a motor vehicle is more advantages
than cycling to get about the town. In my opinion I Replace the word
advantageous
completely
in agreement with Add a missing verb
am completely
this
view, considering the safety and convenience, even though, cycling is more environment
friendly.
Replace the word
environmentally
To begin
with, many people prefer to travel by car
within the city
limits because of its safety and convenience. Road traffic accidents are on the rise and cars are designed with safety measures to protect the passenger in a situation of collision
. Needless to say, in a road traffic accident, the cyclist would sustain more injury than a Add an article
a collision
car
passenger. Thus
, motor vehicles are safer to drive around city
than Add an article
the city
a city
been
on a cycle. Wrong verb form
being
Secondly
, driving a personal vehicle enable to
reach a destination punctually and without the tiresome process of carrying Correct pronoun usage
one to
lugages
. Correct your spelling
luggage
For example
, when I was travelling by bicycle
to work I had to go into minute details and pack only the essentials, whereas when I was taking the car
I stuff the two large bags in to
the back seat. My items would be right Join the words
into
next
in the carpark if a need occur.
On the other hand
, riding a bicycle
has been popularised because it doesn't leave carbon
footprint. The fumes ejected from cars Add an article
a carbon
has
serious air pollution issues. Change the verb form
have
For instance
, studies show high
prevalence of Add an article
a high
respiratory
disease among Add an article
the respiratory
a respiratory
city
dwellers due to inhalation of car
exhausted
fumes. Governments are promoting Replace the word
exhaust
bicycle
use to travel the city
to tackle this
issue. But on the defense
, there are Change the spelling
defence
environment friendly
, electric vehicles which would be a better solution.
In conclusion, cars Add a hyphen
environment-friendly
dominates
over Change the verb form
dominate
bicycle
because they provide a practical, easy, protective mode of transportation. Furthermore
, in order to prevent pollution using cycling as an alternative is not at all feasible.Submitted by ghm_day on
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