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These days, many university courses are offered through the internet . Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom teaching or lectures, while othersclaim that there are significant disadvantages.

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Currently, numerous tertiary
courses
 are being offered electronically. Some people are of the view that online tutorial has vast merits
than
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 traditional classroom teaching,
on the other hand
, others generally think that there are paramount disadvantages, in my opinion, I concur
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 the claim that online classes do more harm than good because practical aspects of the
courses
 are lost and it is expensive as well, as will be discussed in
this
 essay. Undoubtedly, there is a benefit
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 online teaching,
that is
, it is convenient. People find it convenient to participate in online teaching without having to move an inch from their
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.
This
 is to say, anyone can sit in the comfort of his or her house and be taught.
For instance
, a friend of mine attended a webinar while he was
on
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still in bed, having not
groomed
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 for the day.
However
, there
are
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significant
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 number of disadvantages that one could think of, including plummet practicals. Some
courses
such
 as physics and other
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science related
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courses
 are more of practice than theory in order for the student to comprehend fully. If these
courses
 are offered online, how could the practical aspects be achieved
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 Unless conventional classes are organised for these students. Some students
also
 are able to grasp the concept of the course well through the actions and gestures the teacher makes while teaching,
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 I think, will not be gained in
online
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tutorial
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tutorials
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.
In addition
, it is expensive. One needs access to an electronic device
such
 as a laptop or a mobile phone and an internet source
of
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which could be expensive to buy every time there is a session. Again poor
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 can render the teaching ineffective. To conclude, despite the fact that online class has
its
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 own advantage, I think that
its
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 demerits outweigh the merit,
such
 that hands-on training is
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 or deficient and bad internet source can decrease the overall objectives of the course.
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