Some people feel that playing computer games has a nagative impact on children's health and social skills. Others say that it can have a positive impact on their lives. Discuss both these views.

It has become a common trend that

children

play

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internet

games

.While certain individuals argue that

this

has a bad influence on the kid's health and social skills,others say

otherwise

.Both thoughts will be adequately discussed in subsequent paragraphs.

To begin

with,the enhancement of intellectual abilities and learning is one of the major positive influences of

this

trend on youngsters.

This

is because the fast rate of play of these online

games

increases the development of brain cells and their network processes.Since these are essential for the optimum assimilation and understanding of a child,learning is automatically improved.

For example

,a recent study showed that a 12year old primary 4 pupil who competed with primary 6 pupils in a maths quiz and won is a boy who plays

internet

games

for at least 2 hours daily.

Moreover

,it increases their ability to compete with their counterparts globally.

On the other hand

,there is an elevated risk of diseases in the younger ones since the onset of

this

occurrence.

This

is because these kids give all their concentration and time to electronic

games

thus

they do not do physical activities.

This

consequently

results in obesity with subsequent cardiovascular diseases and diabetes. To illustrate,a news report showed that 80% of

children

that have artery illness are those whose outdoor play is prevented by high indulgence in

internet

games

.

Nevertheless

, reduced physical plays lead to low communication with peers. In my opinion, I believe that play of online

games

by

children

has a positive impact.There has been an improvement in the creative and innovative skills of these minors.

This

is because the

internet

plays

enhances

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their neuronal links.

For instance

, the neurons in the body of

children

that play video

games

increase by two folds and

this

makes them think quickly outside the box in case of any challenges and

then

provide solutions more than their counterparts. In conclusion, I believe that these young lads should be encouraged to play video

games

because of the positive influence it has

such

as enhanced learning ability and creativity.

However

,the high risk of disease occurrence and low communication should not be overlooked.