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All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause? How can we overcome the problems of poverty? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The world has faced enormous growth in the past decade. In
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 competitive space,
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 are struggling harder for their daily needs. Certain groups think that moneyed
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 are earning more. Still, with a lack of knowledge and focus, needy
people
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 are not growing up in their economic status, but
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 can be solved by taking necessary measures.
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, by looking at the statistics,
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 from developing or under-developed nations tend to be below their country's economic status. The
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 should promote education and its impact on society. In India,
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, certain groups of tribal
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 are not willing to be educated and continue their traditional business, due to which they lack growth and stay needy.
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, some
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 continue working in their family business which is outdated considering modern-day development. The most viable solution that has been proven in all developed nations is the
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 providing free education to their citizens.
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, the volunteers from welfare organizations must schedule a camp to promote the need for education and try to motivate them to upskill their businesses.
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, there are specific rules imposed in developed countries where
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 from low economic backgrounds can
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 in college through the
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 process in the
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 quota with lesser fees.
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, the
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 can provide stipends to promote a business that yields more value and lower income. To conclude, I firmly; believe that with the help of educational guidance and support from the
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, imposing the regulation can contribute to the growth of the
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 below the poverty line.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Income inequality
  • Wealth gap
  • Socioeconomic disparities
  • Marginalized communities
  • Impoverished individuals
  • Privileged elite
  • Disparity in living standards
  • Social stratification
  • Exacerbate
  • Living below the poverty line
  • Income distribution
  • Lack of access to basic necessities
  • Food insecurity
  • Limited healthcare services
  • Education barriers
  • Socioeconomic mobility
  • Resentment
  • Economic disparities
  • Resource allocation
  • Underprivileged
  • Vulnerable populations
  • Cyclical nature of poverty
  • Government intervention
  • Multilateral cooperation
  • Empowerment
  • Progressive taxation
  • Equal opportunities
  • Social safety nets
  • Unemployment rate
  • Corruption
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