Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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A few individuals have been living not far from their
hometown
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where they were born.
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essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of living
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and provide a logical conclusion. The two main advantages of living
place
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where they were born are good relationships with relatives, friends and
people
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who may introduce
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place
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all over the
world
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.
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, after living many years in the
place
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where
people
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were born, all humans might know about each other and
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state makes good relationships among
people
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.
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, humans can present their living
area
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all over the
world
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.
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, if someone is well off or had a good career and is known to the
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after all
people
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are interested in his or her name, living
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, and age, and
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way
people
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can introduce their
hometown
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to lots of countries.
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, spending most of their
time
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in their local
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has some major disadvantages like do not see the
world
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and they may not be much background knowledge. If
people
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live in one
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afterwards they cannot see various countries. Even if they want to do it but they cannot and it causes too much stress duration of their life.
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, living in the
hometown
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for a long
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causes badly for her or his background knowledge.
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to say, they cannot be well-informed
people
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and these things always fail  them everywhere.
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, most parents cannot answer their children’s sudden questions, because of their less experience which is caused by living in one
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for a long
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where were born. To conclude,
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there are some disadvantages of spending most of their
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 in the
hometown
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where they were born  
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of some bad things like they might not see the countries around the
world
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and they cannot be sophisticated
people
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, it has an extremely positive impact to make good relationship with their relatives and
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they might  introduce their local
area
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for all over the
world
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Familiarity
  • Comfort
  • Social ties
  • Family ties
  • Belonging
  • Resources
  • Opportunities
  • Fear
  • Unknown
  • Financial constraints
  • Cultural attachment
  • Language barriers
  • Limited education
  • Skills
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