Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council, in your letter, - Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre. - Explain the why the centre is important for the local community. - Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed.

#council #sport #leisure #centre #money #friends #community #effects #people

Dear Sir, I am a local resident of your's community living in the Woburn area through

this

letter , I would like to bring your attention to the closing of wards 9 and 10 sport

centre

which was accessible to people of all ages living in the region. Our team tiger has been playing soccer in that

centre

for 5 years and

last

year we

also

won the championship title under

this

sports

organisation.The reason, why I am writing to,I am writing to is that we have heard that ,

this

sports

centre

will be demolished and a new shopping mall will be built in the upcoming years. the news is affecting the whole community as they go there to play a variety of games like cricket , football ,and rugby etc. when it will be taken out

this

will result affecting the health of locals as there will be no

sports

centre

to play games and no new talents will be generated from young children. Residents of wards 9 and 10 have signed a written petition to revoke the decision taken by the city mayor and planning to protest silently in the local park. please consider the health of locals living nearby and support games for the younger generation so that they will take active participation in

sports

activities. yours faithfully, Manju

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