Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Shopping is an evergreen hobby which let us buy things whether we need them or not. A group of
people
believe that advertising plays a critical role to
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us
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to buy products. Others,
however
, share their thoughts that advertisements are not as important and become so common that we ignored them easily. In
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thoughts.
First
of all, advertising products are a demand in the competitive market which targets the audience.
Furthermore
,
this
demand is fulfilled by attracting more
people
in different ways including, billboards, social media and leafletting.
For example
, youtube is a great influencer these days and when we are watching
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it, some
ads
are running. Those
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appear
according to our search results and reflect our interest and encourage us to buy.
Thus
, displaying stuff is a key to selling.
On the other hand
, promotions do not make any difference
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whether
wheather
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whether
we buy or not.
Although
, companies pay a huge revenue for it. when
people
see the same announcement, again and again, it makes them frustrated and they don’t even pay attention to it.
For instance
, during
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certain
ads
are running which make
people
furious and mostly skipped by them to enjoy their
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.
Hence
,
ads
are no longer important. To conclude,
people
have different thoughts about the above-mentioned statements. Advertisement is a kind of trick which sometimes work for a business but sometimes
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according to population. In my opinion, I believe that
this
trick is worth applying but
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of paying a huge amount of money
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it if sellers reduce the price more products will sell.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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