You work at home and have a problem with a plece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain how this problem is affecting your work say what you want the shop or company to do

#work #home #plece #equipment #job #shop #company

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to apprise you that I am facing difficulty with my computer's

keyboard

which is used for my

work

from home purpose needs to be resolved as soon as possible. The keys on the

keyboard

are not working properly.

For instance

, while I am clicking certain letters or numbers, it is typing some special characters. I tried to troubleshoot by checking the settings of the

keyboard

and

cross-checked

Wrong verb form

cross-checking

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the

keyboard

connecting to my laptop which replicates the same issue. I am more reliant on a desktop computer than a laptop because all the software tools which are essential for my

work

purposes are installed on

this

computer which can be operated only by using a

keyboard

Hence

it is hard for me to use my personal laptop for completing my day-to-day tasks.

Hence

I request you to replace

this

keyboard

immediately with a new piece. So I can finish my

work

faster and become more productive at my

work

. I am looking for a prompt response on

this

matter. Yours faithfully, Maria

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

180 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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