Some people opine that computer have made our life more convenient and easier, others, however, oppose it and say that computers have actually made our life complex and stressful. Discuss both these views.

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Technology has
been
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flourished by leaps and bounds in each and every aspect.
Computer
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provides life become more convenient and life ESA easier than manual
work
.
However
, some people opine that these kinds of automatic
devices
can be given more stressful and difficult.
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view points
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viewpoints
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. On the one hand,
computer
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provides many benefits to human as life
easier
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than manual
working
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. These kinds of automatic
devices
provides
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an exact result when we use calculation and we can save a million types of files in one
computer
in order to
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office
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.
For instance
, all companies and offices are using
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for their
work
,
therefore
they can save a lot of time as well as space too.
Hence
,
this
device mainly provides many benefits to
the
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humankind.
On the other hand
, an automatic device always provides many problems to
the
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humankind.
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the
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workforce because nowadays many companies do not like to hire
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for
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,
thus
unemployment ratio might be increased in the upcoming years.
Furthermore
, if any program setting is wrong the entire process will be wrong because these
devices
cannot be thought itself.
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Tamilnadu, state of India still some small enterprises have not
using
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a computer
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computer
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for their business due to they like to
work
with people
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a machine
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machine
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. To conclude,
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has advantages as well as disadvantages, people should have aware of
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it these kinds of
devices
in order to humankind cannot be stressed.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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