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In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message.

#cultures #children #message
In today’s developing world, young
people
 are able to define their abilities from a very young age, which will allow them to dream
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 in the future. Some adults believe that if these skills help teenagers achieve their goals and if they
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encourage
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encourage
 young
people
 they will achieve their
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. From my point of view, I believe that
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for all young
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 by various pressure.
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that the child is being controlled cause
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 he or she has not developed his or her abilities well, and the
children
’s self-pity is emotionally arousing and causes failure.
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 it causes
children
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 because young
people
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they
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 lose their bachelor’s degree.
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because
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 of poor
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completion
 of education.
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, the endless support and kindness of parents
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 one the factors that
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children
 to work hard to achieve their dreams and goals. If
children
 study well in school, it will help them achieve higher results.
Children
 are afraid to start the skills they are interested in
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because
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because
 they think will fail once they start. At the same time, the encouragement of parents
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children
 strong motivation.
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children
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always
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 encouraged AMD motivated to achieve their goals. In
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 it is
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undoubtedly
 true that pushing our
children
 to do their best to achieve their target leads to a better future.
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this
 is not suitable for some of them as there are
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 if they are put under pressure.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • achieve
  • try hard
  • positive mindset
  • self-belief
  • motivates
  • ambitious goals
  • resilience
  • determination
  • confidence
  • self-esteem
  • growth mindset
  • unrealistic expectations
  • disappointment
  • failure
  • effort
  • hard work
  • seek support
  • individual differences
  • abilities
  • capabilities
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