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Famous sportsmen often earn a lot more money than people in other professions. Although sport is important in our lives, everyone should be equal and such big incomes of sport professionals are unjustified. Do you agree or disagree

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Sports are an important part of our lives, they contribute to fitness as well as the entertainment industries but professional sportsmen are paid
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a lot
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different
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 which in my opinion is fully
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justified
 and the reasons will unfold as you read
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prominent
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 reason why celebrity sportsmen are entitled to the money they make is
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the fact that they do
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a lot
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achieve
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achieve
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 professional status. They are constantly improving their techniques and methods of playing and aim to
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achieve
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achieve
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success
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success
 than the previous time whereas
normal
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 job works,
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 the company's needs. An excellent example of
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 is football player Ronaldo, who in
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 interview mentioned that he trained 16 hours
everyday
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 before an important match which in my
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 makes him worthy of the money he received in exchange. Another notable
things
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famous
sportsmen
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 is that they have no freedom to live their lives like a normal
person
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people
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 and are constantly under pressure to make their fans as well as agents happy with their performance.
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, a popular cricketer in India went on a bike ride with his wife but could not enjoy
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 his fans and paparazzi would not leave them
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along
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even though
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 time with his wife. Fans start to believe that have certain ownership
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that person just because he/she is a celebrity and
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where wise
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 the sportsperson is harshly criticised and trolled. In conclusion, I strongly disagree that paying famous sportsperson is unjustified but in
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 they deserve the amount they are paid due the
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pressure of
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 and
mental
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 agony they are put through
everyday
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people
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 they are just machines and not actual
people
 with feelings.
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