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peoples's lives are now surrounded by advertisements. These advertisements have negative impact on people's lives.To what extend you agree or disagree?

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In the era of digital marketing and social media,
companies
 seek to persuade their
customers
 through
advertisements
.
However
, these
advertisements
 can be harmful to people's lives. I believe that if the announcement is used in a good manner, it could be helpful to the market.
Firstly
, some
advertisements
 lead people to underestimate their self-image.
Furthermore
, the community get influenced by the publicity and tries to buy silly but expensive things to acquire the satisfaction shown in the advertisement.
However
, after the use of the product ,
customers
 have a feeling of deception and avoid repurchasing the product.
Secondly
, to position well their products in the market,
companies
 are ready to adopt fake announcements. These are considered tools to increase
companies
' revenues.
For instance
, cosmetics used to get rid of wrinkles can cause severe allergies that
advertisements
 do not mention them.
Also
, recently some studies have shown that
advertisements
 of unhealthy food (e.g., fast food) could increase the obesity rate worldwide by five per cent each year.
Thirdly
, not all
advertisements
 are fake and harmful. Some of them are related to the marketing of healthy products to boost people's immune systems.
Additionally
, others are publicities to increase awareness about some diseases
such
 as cancer, diabetes etc.
Finally
, the
advertisements
 used to harm
customers
' lives should be banned by the government, specifically those that cause severe health issues.
Nonetheless
,
companies
 should have some integrity and provide their
customers
 with reliable and honest
advertisements
.
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