Reducing global environmental damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The reduction of global environmental damage should be solved by governments rather than everyone.As far as my opinion is concerned I fully disagree with the air.With ,
this
statement because it is the responsibility of every single person to take care of the environment.
To begin
with, it is one of the major problems in the world
.It is increasing day
by day
and we all are witness that our environment is damaged by ourselves.We are cutting trees and demolishing the jungles.Furthermore
,we are creating every type of pollution
in the world
like noise pollution
,air pollution
, industrial waste and many more.Only governments cannot reduce this
because if we don't
help them it cannot be finished from the world
.We should grow trees instead
of cutting them,we should reduce pollution
,we don't
destroy the jungles,etc.
On the other side, the government should make strict laws against every type of pollution
if someone doesn't
follow the rules the worst punishment should be given to him/her because as we all know it is increasing day
by day
instead
of decreasing.And the government should have a meeting with the scientists and ask them to invent something that can control the pollution
of industriesCorrect word choice
and
this
there will be no more climate change.
To conclude my essay I must say that global environmental damage will be controlled if every single person do a reduction in every type of pollution
.Government can only make law and it is our responsibility of us that we should follow the rules.At
the Change preposition
In
end
I will say don'Add a comma
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite