Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?
Nowadays some individuals argue about zoo existence, as that entertainment type holds a lot of cons for both,
animals
and spectators. In my essay, I talk about possible troubles that zoos
can bring and their alternatives if they are banned.
The people, who object to zoos
' presence, in their opinion, they
restrain and invade its inhabitants' lives and make them uncomfortable. Correct pronoun usage
apply
For instance
, the lions in cages can feel stressed because of the lack of space to hide from children's noise and other crowds' sight. As a result
, the zoologists have observed that animals
become anxious and nervous and even they try to attack people because of that. Secondly
, as some animals
' natural habitat's climate can be different from the one that they are held in, sudden climate changes can cause illnesses that could be transmitted through the air to the visitors.
There are two possible alternatives to zoos
that can be more helpful and tactful to both visitors and animals
. First,
people can broaden their understanding of fauna life by watching TV channels such
as "Animal Planet" or "National Geographic". That will open even more opportunities to watch new species of animals
that were not in their local zoos
. Second,
some individuals can order a Safari Trip to some of Africa's countries where they can watch animals
' lifestyle life. To have a Safari trip can be quite expensive for someone, so if any government wants to reduce the local zoo it should have the notion of making trip tickets price cheaper for the public.
In conclusion, even if the zoos
can bring positive vibes to their spectators, these places are also
nests of infections and discomfort for wild animals
. Some alternatives that were mentioned above give the possibility to close local zoos
and let animals
be free in their natural habitats.Submitted by zakhra.aliyeva2001 on
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Task Achievement
Ensure that the introduction clearly presents the topic and your viewpoint. Conclude with a summary of the main points and your final opinion.
Task Achievement
Your essay must clearly address all parts of the task. Expand upon alternatives to zoos, providing a balanced discussion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Use a variety of connective words to help link ideas and paragraphs, thus improving the flow of the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Develop each main point with clear explanations and relevant examples to support your arguments effectively.
Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...
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